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a poem

Postby Randall » Mon Feb 15, 2010 9:10 am

a song written some time ago....
I hope it inspires...

And so it begins……….

The soul plays its song,
weaving together life times.

With rhythm and purpose it beats with
Clarity upon the shores of humanity

It is my song it sings with the voices of millions
in a chorus that fills the universe with understanding

Slowly, powerfully each soul joins
changing what was before into what is now.

Never ending is the song
the dawn that shapes our world.

With each note it matures
filling the universe with love.

Joining all that have come before
and all yet to be.
We move ever closer to our purpose………

Lift up your voice and
Light up the world
with your song of the soul
awaken to the love created
just for you.

With each note others awaken to the song of love
and we are shown the power of Creation…………

And so it begins……………..
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Re: a poem

Postby pineal » Mon Feb 15, 2010 12:24 pm

Welcome to Forum =0)

Nice song of Life

With Love

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Re: a poem

Postby mirjana » Mon Feb 15, 2010 3:35 pm

I also love your poem about journey of the Soul. Very nice!

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Re: a poem

Postby Heidi » Tue Feb 16, 2010 2:09 am

I liked your poem Randall.

I especially liked the following four lines that made me imagine our souls like small torches. If we could leave aside the things that divide us, and sang in unison, we would live in a much brighter world.

It is my song it sings with the voices of millions
in a chorus that fills the universe with understanding

Slowly, powerfully each soul joins
changing what was before into what is now.
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Re: a poem

Postby Randall » Tue Feb 23, 2010 4:43 pm

closing my eyes.......

looking inward.......

stripping away my preconceptions.....

feeling the intimate love from one soul to another...

concious oneness woven together in a fusion of creation.

I look into your eyes and I see what love is........

we move to unite with our world and our universe........

touching the soul of man

stirring its depths........

children reborn of love within understandings house....

we have come at last.
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Also a poem

Postby Sabina » Tue Feb 23, 2010 5:03 pm

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Re: a poem

Postby mirjana » Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:51 pm

Where is the poet of the soul, there is lot of light.
The same thoughts but said in the way not only to be understood but to move far, far further...
Deep Spirits are poets in heart.

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Re: a poem

Postby Sabina » Tue Feb 23, 2010 6:57 pm

mirjana wrote:Deep Spirits are poets in heart.

It does seem so, doesn't it?
That's beautiful.

I will have to start using alternate words for "beautiful" though.. get a little more creative with how I express what's on my mind, or in my heart.
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